Chapter 17 'Coarse Flour': Summary, Themes, and Study Guide

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Summary

The chapter opens in September 1949 with the family still waiting for a chance to escape Qingdao by train. Cousin Wei tips off the narrator’s mother that a new batch of tickets is about to be printed, and the family rushes to the station—a large German-style building with a clock tower—only to find a line already stretching more than a hundred meters into the street. The mother waits in line for three days, sleeping on the street with blankets, while the narrator and Di bring her food and occasionally take her place.

On the third day, chaos erupts. Fights break out whenever someone is accused of cutting in line, and there are no police outside to intervene—all available officers are inside protecting the ticket sellers. People are beaten bloody while others watch, pressed together and terrified of losing their place. A small group storms the line and cuts in through the station doors, and within minutes all order disintegrates as everyone surges forward. The tickets sell out before the mother can even reach the station. A young woman lies on the floor clutching her bleeding face, shrieking that her tickets were stolen. The family returns home empty-handed.

In a rare moment of despair, the mother tells the narrator that Di was right—they won’t be able to get tickets. The narrator tries to comfort her, invoking the will of the Gods, and the mother responds with dark humor about bringing matchboxes to fold next time. The narrator plans to sell bread from the wheelbarrow to people waiting in line. She reflects on the unfairness of a city where people trample one another over rice porridge.

On October 1, 1949, Mao Zedong stands in Beijing’s Tiananmen Square and proclaims the People’s Republic of China. The Soviet Union is the only foreign power to recognize his government and promptly cuts ties with the Nationalists. In Qingdao, cadres mount radios on trucks and blast Mao’s victory speech. People celebrate with firecrackers and wave the red and yellow flag. The narrator is in the main square with Di, who cheers along with the crowd—the smart thing to do with cadres and Party supporters surrounding them—but the narrator feels betrayed. The political force that has haunted her nightmares now governs her country.

The narrator has been mentally preparing for life under Communist rule, trying to focus on the positive possibility that the war might finally be over, but she is tumbling deeper into despair. Taiwan seems like an impossible dream as the avenues toward it close.

Mao’s victory brings an expansion of the PLA’s authority in Qingdao. The PLA deploys soldiers to maintain order at the train station during the next round of ticket sales—and to observe who is trying to flee, potentially catching wanted traitors. Cousin Wei, predicting that his superiors will also increase police presence, embarks on a networking campaign, delivering bottles of liquor and mooncakes to key superiors as Mid-Autumn Festival gifts. His strategy works: he is assigned as reinforcement for the ticket sellers during the next batch of sales.

Cousin Wei warns the mother to temper her expectations. There will be at least thirty more police officers, and everyone—including the Communists’ own military—will try to get tickets, which are worth a fortune on the black market. The next sales will be in early November, for travel in December. He asks about the golden tael, which the mother confirms she still has, hidden in her undergarments. He tells her to bring it to him before he goes to the station.

The chapter also introduces Mrs. Ding more fully. She is nosy and gossips shamelessly, but her behavior stems more from loneliness than malice. She is protective of her block and serves as a volunteer grandmother to Lan when the mother cannot watch her. A small-scale landlord, she is paranoid of the Communists. She warns the mother that Di has been fraternizing with Party cadres, insisting that the family is better off unseen and unnoticed.

When the mother confronts Di about the bags of coarse flour she has been bringing home from the cadres’ trucks, Di erupts. She reveals that she has been telling the cadres a false story—that she is the daughter of peasants and her father died of tuberculosis, which also crippled her sister. She insists the cadres are not as bad as the family thinks, dismissing their fears as Nationalist propaganda. The narrator interjects, reminding Di of what happened in Zhucheng: Mr. and Mrs. Lin stoned to death, family members buried alive and beaten. Di counters that there are bad people in every group, and that Chiang Kai-Shek would have turned China into an American colony.

The mother orders Di to stop talking to the cadres, but Di screams that the flour has brought them food and that she is the only one trying to ride this tide and raise the family up. When the mother insists they are not staying in Qingdao, Di declares she is going to join the Communist Party Youth League and, when old enough, the People’s Liberation Army. She slams the door so hard the windows rattle, and Uncle Sen yells feebly from the other room.

Cadres occasionally wander into the alley, putting up posters of Mao. After they leave, Mrs. Ding washes the walls, a small act of resistance that gives the family some comfort. By October 15, Chiang’s armies have left Guangzhou and gone west to Chongqing. The narrator begins to worry that Di is right—they may never be able to outrun the Communists, and even Taiwan might eventually fall under the red and yellow flag.

Key Events

The family’s three-day wait for train tickets ends in violence and failure when tickets sell out before the mother reaches the station.
Mao Zedong proclaims the People’s Republic of China on October 1, 1949; the Soviet Union recognizes his government and cuts ties with the Nationalists.
The PLA expands its authority in Qingdao and deploys soldiers to the train station for the next ticket sales.
Cousin Wei secures a position as reinforcement through strategic gift-giving during the Mid-Autumn Festival.
Mrs. Ding warns the mother that Di has been fraternizing with Party cadres.
Di reveals she has given the cadres a false family story and declares her intention to join the Communist Party Youth League and the PLA.
Chiang’s armies retreat from Guangzhou to Chongqing by October 15.

Character Development

The narrator moves from cautious optimism to deepening despair. She tries to comfort her mother with talk of the will of the Gods, but privately acknowledges the unfairness of their situation. Her sense of betrayal when Di cheers for Mao’s victory is visceral—the political force that has haunted her nightmares now rules her country.

Di undergoes the most dramatic transformation in this chapter. She has been quietly building relationships with the cadres, accepting flour and other handouts, and constructing a false identity for survival. Her defense of the Communists—dismissing the family’s trauma as Nationalist propaganda—represents a fundamental break with her family’s worldview. Her declaration that she will join the Youth League and the PLA is a direct challenge to the mother’s plan to escape.

The mother shows rare vulnerability when she admits defeat about the tickets, but quickly recovers with practical humor. Her priority remains getting the family on a train, and she is willing to use the golden tael—her last significant resource—to make it happen.

Cousin Wei demonstrates his pragmatism and networking skills, using traditional gift-giving customs to secure a position that might help the family. He is careful to manage expectations, warning the mother that the odds are still against them.

Mrs. Ding is revealed as a more complex figure than initially presented—nosy but protective, paranoid but helpful. Her small acts of resistance, like washing Mao posters off the walls, provide a counterpoint to Di’s embrace of the new regime.

Themes, Symbols, or Motifs

Desperation and survival: The train station scene—with its savage fights, stolen tickets, and a young woman bleeding on the floor—illustrates the brutal lengths people will go to for a chance at escape. The narrator’s observation that people trample one another over rice porridge captures the moral collapse of a city under pressure.

Luck as a current: The narrator describes luck as a current they must plow against, a metaphor that captures the family’s sense of swimming against an overwhelming tide.

Coarse flour: The flour Di brings home from the cadres symbolizes Communist patronage and the seductive appeal of the new regime’s material support. It is also the source of the family’s conflict—the tangible evidence of Di’s collaboration.

False identity for survival: Di’s fabricated story—that she is the daughter of peasants and her father died of tuberculosis—mirrors the family’s broader need to conceal their history. It is a survival strategy, but one that puts the family at risk if discovered.

Small acts of resistance: Mrs. Ding washing Mao posters off the walls is a futile but meaningful gesture of defiance, a way of maintaining dignity in the face of an overwhelming new order.

The golden tael: The family’s last significant asset, hidden in the mother’s undergarments, represents both their dwindling resources and their determination to escape at any cost.

Why This Chapter Matters

This chapter marks a decisive historical and personal turning point. Mao’s proclamation of the People’s Republic of China transforms the political landscape, making the family’s escape plan more urgent and more difficult. The PLA’s expanded authority in Qingdao—including its presence at the train station—means that even the act of fleeing is now observed and potentially punished.

The chapter also escalates the family’s internal conflict to a breaking point. Di’s embrace of the Communist regime, her false identity, and her declaration that she will join the Youth League and PLA represent a fundamental challenge to the family’s unity and their shared goal of escape. The narrator’s fear that Di might be right—that they cannot outrun the Communists—adds a note of genuine despair to the chapter’s close.

Finally, the chapter deepens the novel’s exploration of how ordinary people navigate revolutionary change: through bribery, networking, concealment, small acts of resistance, and sometimes through embracing the new order. Cousin Wei’s gift-giving and Di’s calculated fraternization are two sides of the same survival instinct, even as they pull the family in different directions.

Study Questions and Answers

1. How does the train station scene establish the stakes for the family’s escape plan?

The scene shows that escape is not simply a matter of wanting to leave—it is a brutal competition in which violence, theft, and chaos are the norm. The mother waits three days in line, only to see tickets sell out before she reaches the station. A young woman’s tickets are stolen as she bleeds on the floor. The scene establishes that the family’s chances are slim, making their continued determination—and the mother’s willingness to use the golden tael—all the more significant.

2. Why does Di’s false identity create such a serious risk for the family?

Di has told the cadres that she is the daughter of peasants and that her father died of tuberculosis, which also crippled her sister. This fabrication conceals the family’s true history—including what happened in Zhucheng—but it also creates a dangerous vulnerability. If the cadres discover the lie, or if someone follows Di home, the entire family could be exposed. The mother’s fear is not paranoia; it is a realistic assessment of the consequences of being discovered as people who should not be in Qingdao.

3. What does the conflict between Di and the narrator reveal about their different responses to Communist rule?

The narrator’s response is rooted in direct experience—she saw people shot, witnessed Mr. and Mrs. Lin stoned to death, and remembers family members buried alive and beaten. Di’s response is rooted in pragmatism and hope: the cadres give her food, and she believes the new regime offers stability and opportunity. Their argument is not just about politics; it is about whether survival means resistance or accommodation, and whether the family’s traumatic past should define their future.