Chapter 32: The Smoke of Burning Prayers — Matilda

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Summary

Matilda crosses the icy river and reaches the eastern bank, where she studies Baron Grimald of Englewood’s camp. She notices countless trails of smoke rising from tents and braziers and smells burned parchment and ink. The warriors are burning prayers to a Skyward divine, and Matilda intends to discover which god they are summoning.

Hidden beneath her cloak, she moves stealthily through the muddy pathways. She observes warriors writing on scraps of parchment and feeding the flames. Locating Grimald’s grand tent at the crest of a hillock, she cuts a seam in the fabric with a small dagger to spy on him. Inside, Grimald paces anxiously, drinking wine and studying a map. He is waiting for a divine response.

A squire announces the arrival of a visitor, and Grimald kneels. Warin, god of river, iron, and spring, enters. Grimald thanks him for answering the summons. Warin dismisses the herald (Matilda) as harmless, but Grimald reveals that she is now married to his nephew Vincent. Warin spews his wine in shock and shows green-eyed jealousy before regaining his composure.

Grimald requests Warin’s favor to reclaim Wyndrift fortress, claiming it is his by inheritance. When Warin asks what Grimald will offer, the baron falters. Warin proposes that he become the keeper of the bridge, demanding a toll from every mortal who crosses. Grimald hesitates.

Suddenly Warin sniffs the air. He detects Matilda’s magical scent—parchment, ink, cloves, and smoke. He knows she is watching. He declares that he has been summoned for a hunt, summons a bow and arrows, and prepares to pursue her. Matilda’s heart pounds; she remembers Bade’s advice about when to retreat. She breaks into a run.

Key Events

• Matilda crosses the river and reaches Grimald’s camp.
• She observes warriors burning prayers to a divine being.
• She cuts a seam in Grimald’s tent and spies on him.
• Grimald kneels before Warin, who has arrived in response to the prayers.
• Warin dismisses the herald as harmless but is shocked to learn Matilda is married to Vincent.
• Grimald asks for Warin’s aid to reclaim Wyndrift.
• Warin demands to be made keeper of the bridge, with tolls from every passer.
• Warin detects Matilda’s magic and announces a hunt.
• Matilda flees as Warin prepares to pursue her.

Character Development

• Matilda: Displays courage and resourcefulness by infiltrating an enemy camp. She is shaken when Warin recognizes her presence, underscoring her vulnerability. Her decision to flee shows prudence, honoring Bade’s advice.
• Grimald of Englewood: Appears desperate and anxious, willing to bow to a god and bargain away control of the bridge. His fear exposes his insecurity.
• Warin: Reveals arrogance, jealousy, and possessiveness. His dismissive attitude toward Matilda crumbles when he learns of her marriage. He shows his power and temper by abruptly ending the negotiation to hunt her.

Themes, Symbols, or Motifs

• Smoke and burning prayers: Represents mortal desperation to gain divine favor. The smoke also becomes a means for Warin to detect Matilda’s magic.
• River crossing: Symbolizes Matilda’s transition from observer to hunted; she enters enemy territory and is eventually forced to retreat.
• Magic scent: The distinctive fragrance of Matilda’s magic (parchment, ink, cloves, smoke) is a recurring motif that ties her identity to her herald role and betrays her presence.
• The hunt: Warin’s summons of bow and arrows reframes the chapter’s end as a chase, highlighting the power imbalance between god and herald.

Why This Chapter Matters

This chapter escalates the personal conflict between Matilda and Warin. Warin learns of her marriage to Vincent, stoking his jealousy, and discovers her spying, turning him into an active pursuer. The negotiation with Grimald also introduces a concrete goal for Warin—control of the bridge—which will affect all river crossings. Matilda’s flight sets the stage for a direct confrontation in the chapters to come.

Study Questions

1. Why does Warin abruptly end his conversation with Grimald?
   Answer: He detects Matilda’s magical scent and realizes she has been spying. Rather than expose her immediately, he decides to pursue her himself, calling it a hunt.

2. What does Grimald hope to gain from Warin, and what is he willing to sacrifice?
   Answer: Grimald wants Warin’s favor to reclaim Wyndrift fortress. He is willing to grant Warin control of the bridge and allow him to collect tolls, though he hesitates when he realizes the cost.

3. How does Warin’s reaction to Matilda’s marriage advance the plot?
   Answer: Warin’s jealousy personalizes his vendetta against Matilda. He no longer sees her as a harmless herald but as a rival, which drives him to hunt her and increases the stakes of their conflict.

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