Essay prompts Tourist Season Enid Shomer

12 Analytical Essay Prompts for Tourist Season

These prompts are designed for close reading and argumentation. Each draws on specific episodes, characters, or structural choices in the collection. Where useful, internal guides and thematic pages are linked.


1. Iris Hornstein’s Willingness to Become a Bridge

Why it matters: The story hinges on a moment of voluntary belief. How and why does Iris move from skepticism to acceptance, and what does this reveal about identity as a choice rather than a destiny?

Sample thesis direction: Iris agrees to become a cultural bridge not because she is convinced of reincarnation, but because the role offers her a purpose that her Miami life as a speech therapist lacks—a purpose tied to patience, study, and the causality of delayed fulfillment.

Evidence leads:

  • The annunciation scene with Lu and Wangrit in Chapter 1, and Iris’s immediate skepticism.
  • Her treadmill training and frustration with indirect instruction—she must “learn through sounds and books” without clear payoffs.
  • The private audience with the Dalai Lama in Dharamsala, where she formally accepts the role.
  • The return to Florida, where she resumes work with a stuttering child while Lu and Wangrit adapt—a contrasting scene that tests her new patience.
  • See also Iris Hornstein character page.

2. Sheila’s Lie as a Second Heart

Why it matters: The story ends with Sheila deciding to protect Royal by living an eternal lie. This raises questions about guilt, motherhood, and whether silence can ever be redemptive.

Sample thesis direction: Sheila’s decision to embrace the lie is not passive acceptance but an active moral calculus: she chooses the long-term safety of her daughter over her own need for confession, making the lie a character change that transforms her from a privileged spouse to a deliberate guardian of a secret.

Evidence leads:

  • The alternating present and flashback structure reveals the slow revelation of the kidnapping (Chapter 2).
  • Win’s accusation that Sheila should have shared the guilt—he “hated her for it.”
  • The final foreshadowing image: the lie is “a heavy, dead second heart” that will outlive everyone.
  • The lake scene where Sheila walks like a tightrope walker, “embracing the empty air.”
  • Internal link: Secrets and Guilt theme.

3. Garland McKenney’s Compulsive Risk Across Two Stories

Why it matters: Garland appears in both “Fill In the Blank” and “Sweethearts.” Her inability to feel remorse drives a repeated pattern of crime and self-destruction. The prompts asks what impels her and what might prevent future harm.

Sample thesis direction: Garland’s risk-taking is not a search for thrill but a response to a deadened inner self—her personality test reveals a hunger for danger that substitutes for genuine connection, and each crime (the robbery, the fire) momentarily fills the void left by her mother’s death.

Evidence leads:

  • The personality test in “Fill In the Blank” that exposes her “hunger for risk” and ties to her dead mother.
  • The robbery scene: Linda’s guilt contrasts with Garland’s lack of remorse; Garland attends counseling but remains unwilling to change.
  • In “Sweethearts,” the symbol of fire: she burns Clarence’s fish camp after feeling betrayed, then later finds her dog poisoned—foreshadowing a cycle of retaliation.
  • The ending of “Sweethearts”: Garland flees Sweetheart, leaving a note for Carlene, still on the run.
  • See also: Garland McKenney character.

4. Frieda and Milt: Learning to See Each Other Again

Why it matters: The story of Frieda and Milt centres on retirement’s erosion of identity and the slow work of renegotiating a marriage. The Polaroid incident and the bus trip force them to confront what they have lost and what remains.

Sample thesis direction: Frieda’s memory of her WASP flying career and the Polaroid photos of Belle Snyder act as parallel revelations: both expose hidden selves—Frieda’s lost pilot identity and Irv’s secret attempts to please his wife—that ultimately push Frieda and Milt toward a more honest, if imperfect, understanding.

Evidence leads:

  • Frieda’s foreshadowing daydreams of Milt’s death and her volunteer work as a Pink Angel (Chapter 4).
  • The St. Augustine bus trip: Frieda’s desire for activity versus Milt’s resistance; their argument about “group activities.”
  • The beach scene where Irv takes Polaroids of young women and later collapses; Frieda retrieves the explicit images of Belle.
  • The frank argument after the incident, where Frieda and Milt begin to find common ground—character change for both.
  • Contrast between Frieda’s solitary flying memory and Milt’s reading of Jewish prizefighters—two internal lives.
  • Internal link: Marriage and Relationships theme.

5. Janet’s Death: Rapture or Accident?

Why it matters: The story’s ambiguous ending forces readers to decide whether Janet’s descent is suicide, accident, or ecstatic surrender. The foreshadowing of Klonopin and the compression effect complicates any single interpretation.

Sample thesis direction: Shomer uses the chemical effects of compression to blur the line between voluntary and involuntary action, suggesting that Janet’s “rapture” is a product of both her psychological desperation and the pharmacological alteration of consciousness—making her death neither fully chosen nor purely accidental.

Evidence leads:

  • Janet’s panic disorder and the failure of her marriage to Gordon; the contrasting scenes of their counselling sessions versus her diving memories.
  • The moment she removes her flippers—a deliberate act that signals a shift from caution to abandon.
  • The dive operator’s explanation about Klonopin concentrating in the blood at depth.
  • The speculative ending image of Janet on the trench floor, “her life rearranging into rapturous patterns.”
  • Cross-reference with Rapture chapter analysis.

6. Alternating Points of View in “The Hottest Spot on Earth”

Why it matters: The story switches between Jill Simons and Patricia Warde, a rare technique in short fiction. The choice of structure affects how we judge each character’s motivations.

Sample thesis direction: The alternating POV prevents readers from fully siding with either woman, revealing that both Jill and Patricia are genuinely wrong and genuinely sympathetic—the technique mirrors the title’s “hottest spot,” where two incompatible perspectives must coexist under extreme pressure.

Evidence leads:

  • The initial clash at the Slash Writers’ Convention panel, where academic condescension meets creative defensiveness.
  • The arrest at the Nevada Nuclear Test Site alongside Desert Consortium protesters—a shared experience that forces bonding.
  • The jail scene where the women argue and then begin to connect; Zen Frank’s early departure for her baby.
  • Patricia’s imagined prank (planting a joke in Jill’s luggage) and the later hint that Jill unknowingly models a character on Patricia—foreshadowing of future collaboration.
  • See also Themes: Travel and Tourism as Metaphor.

7. Garland and Clarence: Power, Betrayal, and the Symbol of Fire

Why it matters: The threesome in the fish camp is a turning point. Garland’s reaction—grabbing the revolver and burning the camp—reveals her need for control and her inability to tolerate vulnerability.

Sample thesis direction: Fire in “Sweethearts” is both a destructive act and a cleansing one: Garland destroys the camp not only to punish Clarence but to obliterate a space where she was made powerless, yet the act fails to give her lasting control, as evidenced by her flight and the poisoning of her dog.

Evidence leads:

  • The journey to the fish camp: Garland is stranded overnight, already uneasy.
  • The flashback to their affair, constructing a pattern of power imbalance.
  • Garland grabs Clarence’s revolver, forces him and Shelley to leave, then sets the camp on fire.
  • The contrasting scene of returning home to find her dog Judy poisoned—foreshadowing that the consequences of her actions will follow her.
  • The farewell note to Carlene and the later phone call from New York—Garland remains a character defined by flight.

8. Abby Presner’s Delayed Fear and the Question of Empathy

Why it matters: Abby feels no terror during the encounter with the young drug dealer, only afterward. This temporal gap raises questions about how empathy can coexist with self-protection.

Sample thesis direction: Abby’s delayed terror reveals that her empathy during the encounter was a form of dissociation—she performs courage because she cannot process the threat in the moment, and the subsequent drinking and retention of the pager number are attempts to reclaim a narrative that she never fully controlled.

Evidence leads:

  • The crash itself: Abby crashes her friend’s car into the Lincoln and lies to the young man, claiming she is a reporter (Chapter 8).
  • The young man shows his gang tattoo and gives her his pager number with the code 666.
  • After Esther arrives, Abby experiences delayed terror and drinks heavily.
  • She keeps the pager number for months before discarding it, troubled by whether “her empathy was unique enough to change his fate”—a direct thematic statement.
  • Foreshadowing in the story’s title and its structural pause before the aftermath.

9. Riva Stern’s Discovery of Family Secrets

Why it matters: The story is built on the revelation that Riva’s father stole from his own brother. Riva must reconcile the family image with the truth, and her relationship with David is entangled in this discovery.

Sample thesis direction: David’s persistent questions are a tool of seduction and control; he reveals the secret to Riva not to free her but to bind her, and the summer ends with Riva having solved some mysteries (the theft) while remaining blind to others (David’s manipulation).

Evidence leads:

  • Riva’s resentment at finding cousin David at the Withers Company (Chapter 9).
  • David’s gradual questions that lead to the revelation about Riva’s father’s gambling addiction and theft.
  • The contrasting scenes of their secret romance versus the public workplace gender dynamics.
  • Riva follows David and witnesses him kissing Alma, the senior bookkeeper.
  • The final scene two years later at Woolworth’s, where Riva shares a cigarette with Alma—character change through grown perspective.
  • The line from Alma: “When you’re not being beautiful, make trouble.”

10. Helen’s Transformation: Metaphor or Magical Realism?

Why it matters: The story leaves open whether Helen’s de-aging is literal or figurative. The ending with the wolf tail pushes toward the fantastical, but the story’s emotional weight comes from a very real sense of invisibility and loss.

Sample thesis direction: Shomer uses magical realist detail to make literal the invisibility that older women experience: Helen’s return to youth is not a fantasy of restored beauty but a metaphor for how society refuses to see aging women, and the wolf tail represents the wildness that has always been suppressed under the role of wife and mother.

Evidence leads:

  • Helen wakes with “unusual rest” and notices she looks younger; she repeatedly checks mirrors (Chapter 10).
  • Claude leaves a letter confessing an affair with Glenda and saying he cannot cope with Helen’s change.
  • The Halloween visit where Benita mentions older women in Mexico transforming into animals—foreshadowing.
  • Helen prepares to fly to Seattle, but on the eve of departure she grows a wolf tail.
  • The ending: Helen strokes the tail and says farewell to her family internally, embracing the transformation as a release.
  • Internal link: Aging and Invisibility theme.

11. Florida as a Character: Sense of Place Across the Collection

Why it matters: The reading group questions in Chapter 13 ask about Florida’s role. The state is not just a backdrop but active in shaping the characters’ experiences—from Frieda’s St. Augustine bus trip to Janet’s Cayman Trench dive.

Sample thesis direction: Florida functions as a liminal space in Tourist Season—a place of transit, tourism, and disguise—where characters like Iris (who travels to Tibet but returns to Florida) and Sheila (fleeing Mobile) are seen as tourists in their own lives, permanently passing through.

Evidence leads:

  • Frieda’s observation about Florida’s tourist season stretching from Thanksgiving to Easter (Chapter 4).
  • Janet’s dive in the Cayman Trench, geographically part of the Florida/Caribbean region, where the off-season is the setting.
  • The bus trip to St. Augustine—a restored “First Coast” that freezes history for consumption.
  • The contrasting settings: Miami (Iris), Hallandale (Frieda), Sweetheart (Garland), Las Vegas (Jill/Patricia), and the Nevada Nuclear Test Site—places that are themselves transient or touristic.
  • Shomer’s interview (Chapter 12) confirms Florida roots as inspiration.

12. The Collection’s Unity: “Tourist Season” as a Metaphor for Living

Why it matters: The final reading group question asks how all characters are tourists in their own lives. This prompt asks students to trace the metaphor across multiple stories and assess whether the collection holds together thematically.

Sample thesis direction: The tourism metaphor operates on three levels: actual tourism (Frieda’s bus trip, Jill’s convention), the tourist gaze on one’s own life (Iris as a bridge, Garland watching her own crimes), and the ending transformation that forces characters to leave their old selves behind—making every life a tourist season that eventually ends.

Evidence leads:

  • The title story’s opening line in Chapter 4: the bell “ringing in the distance” becomes loud after Milt’s retirement—Frieda becomes a tourist in her own marriage.
  • Foreshadowing in the Polaroid photos: Irv hopes “to find himself in the images”—a tourist hoping for self-recognition.
  • Sheila’s final decision to live a lie: she becomes a tourist in her own future.
  • Helen’s transformation into a wolf: she leaves not only her home but her species—the ultimate tourist in a new land.
  • The final chapter (13) explicitly asks whether Iris, Sheila, Garland, and Helen leave their old lives due to causality from within or from circumstance.

For further reading, visit the Questions and Answers page or explore characters like Sheila, Frieda, Janet, and Helen.