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Chapter 13: “12” – Summary and Analysis

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Summary

The narrator and McEvoy take the 5 freeway south toward Los Angeles, enduring six hours of heavy traffic. Listening to satellite radio, they absorb round-the-clock wildfire coverage on CNN, NPR, and Fox. McEvoy occasionally checks video feeds from KTLA Channel 5 on his phone. Los Angeles is burning from catastrophic firestorms on the west and northeast sides of the county.

Maggie, the narrator’s wife, calls when she reaches his house. She is panicked and angry because sheriff’s deputies would not let her enter her own Altadena neighborhood to salvage belongings. Despite her position as Los Angeles County district attorney, roadblocks are strictly enforced: all lanes are reserved for fire department vehicles and evacuation. No one can go in, only out. The narrator reassures her that she is safe in his home, but her consolation is limited. After he explains how to use the television remote, she settles in to watch wall-to-wall local coverage, hoping a home remains for her in the morning.

The narrator’s daughter checks in from Hawaii, having heard news of the fires. He confirms that her mother is safe and that they can only wait for morning to see how the wind and damage develop.

As the car crests the Tehachapi Mountains on the Grapevine and descends through the Santa Susanas into the San Fernando Valley, the narrator and McEvoy see the glow of fire on the ridgeline ahead. The Santa Monica Mountains separate the Valley from the Westside, and the narrator feels a dread knowing homes are burning on the far side. McEvoy exclaims that the Palisades must be burning. The narrator nods, struck by what he calls an almost biblical firestorm. Newscasters have referred to the Santa Ana winds as “devil winds,” and a Fox commentator compares Los Angeles to Sodom and Gomorrah. The narrator reflects on how humans turn to religion during natural disasters.

They switch from the 5 to the 405 freeway, cutting through the Valley toward Sherman Oaks, where McEvoy will be dropped off. McEvoy turns off the radio, and they drive in silence and awe. The narrator recalls a Dave Alvin song whose lyrics he can never forget: “California’s burning / There’s trouble in the promised land. / You better pack up your family / And get out while you can.”

Key Events

  • The narrator and McEvoy drive from their origin to Los Angeles, taking six hours in heavy traffic on the 5 freeway.
  • They listen to satellite radio and McEvoy’s phone for continuous wildfire coverage.
  • Maggie calls from the narrator’s house, frustrated that she cannot reach her own Altadena home due to roadblocks.
  • The narrator’s daughter calls from Hawaii, concerned about her mother and the fires.
  • The car passes through the Tehachapi Mountains, and the travelers see the glow of fire on the ridgeline.
  • McEvoy identifies the Palisades fire; the narrator reflects on the biblical language used by news commentators.
  • They switch to the 405 freeway, heading toward Sherman Oaks to drop off McEvoy.
  • The narrator recalls a Dave Alvin song about California burning.

Character Development

  • The Narrator: Demonstrates calm and reassurance toward Maggie and his daughter, even as he internally feels dread. His reflective nature surfaces when he contemplates the human tendency to seek religion in disaster and the echo of a song lyric.
  • McEvoy: Exhibits awe and a sharp awareness of the fires, identifying the specific blaze in the Palisades. His choice to kill the radio suggests a need for silent processing.
  • Maggie: Shows desperation and helplessness despite her high office. Her authority as district attorney is useless against the emergency protocols, revealing the limits of power in a crisis.

Themes, Symbols, or Motifs

  • Fire as Biblical Judgment: The “devil winds” and the Fox commentator’s comparison of Los Angeles to Sodom and Gomorrah frame the wildfire as a form of divine punishment or reckoning. The narrator’s reflection on religion in disaster underlines this theme.
  • The Impotence of Status: Maggie, the district attorney, cannot bypass roadblocks. Her position offers no privilege against the impersonal force of the fire and the rules of evacuation.
  • The Fragility of Home: The narrator’s house becomes a shelter, but Maggie’s own home is threatened. The song lyric “trouble in the promised land” underscores the loss of security in California.
  • Media Consumption: The constant coverage via radio and phone highlights how modern disasters are experienced both directly and through mediated information.

Why This Chapter Matters

Chapter 13 shifts the narrative’s momentum from a crime-centered plot to a natural disaster that upends all personal and professional priorities. It humanizes the characters by placing them in a crisis that cannot be solved by legal skill or authority. The chapter also deepens the sense of place, using the drive into Los Angeles to show the scale of the catastrophe. The Dave Alvin lyric reinforces the theme of a paradise lost, setting an elegiac tone for the chapters to follow. This chapter serves as a turning point where external chaos intrudes on the protagonists’ lives.

Study Questions

  1. Question: Why is Maggie unable to enter her own neighborhood despite being the district attorney?
    Answer: Sheriff’s deputies enforce a strict roadblock to ensure all lanes are used for fire department vehicles and evacuation. They allow only outward movement, and no one—regardless of official standing—can go in.

  2. Question: What biblical and cultural references appear in the chapter, and what purpose do they serve?
    Answer: News commentators call the Santa Ana winds “devil winds” and one compares Los Angeles to Sodom and Gomorrah. The narrator recalls a Dave Alvin song about California burning. These references frame the fires as apocalyptic, emphasizing the scale of the disaster and the human impulse to seek meaning in catastrophe.

  3. Question: How does the narrator’s reflection on religion during natural disasters reveal his inner state?
    Answer: He wonders about “the retreat humans made to religion in the face of natural disasters,” showing his analytical mind even in crisis. This moment suggests he is trying to make sense of the overwhelming destruction, distancing himself from the raw panic.

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