Themes Death in the Mouth: Original Horror by People of Color Sloane Leong and Cassie Hart

Revenge and Justice in Death in the Mouth

Thematic Claim: Revenge as Entangled with Justice

In Death in the Mouth, revenge is never a clean moral balancing. Instead, supernatural agency allows victims of systemic violence, abusive parents, and exploitation to reclaim power, but the cost is often dehumanization and the perpetuation of trauma. The anthology questions whether true justice can exist when cycles of retribution are fueled by pain and memory. Revenge becomes a tangled act—both liberating and destructive—and the line between victim and perpetrator blurs.

Charity’s Unanswered Revenge in “They Will Take Up Serpents”

Charity’s story illustrates the failure of institutional justice. Her father’s violent baptism and snake-handling abuse leave physical and psychological scars, but when she confronts him as an adult, he denies the events, gaslighting her memory. There is no supernatural intervention here; Charity’s only revenge is to remember clearly. The scar on her head and the snakebite mark are evidence she carries, yet the father’s revisionist narrative robs her of validation. This chapter sets a baseline: without supernatural power, the abused are left to live with unresolved pain. Justice remains absent, and the past is weaponized against the victim.

Supernatural Retribution in “She”

The protagonist of “She” transforms into a swamp creature after years of abuse by her father. When he returns to finish her, she uses her new powers to kill him and his accomplices, consuming their bodies while a wolf-like companion feasts alongside her. This act of revenge is visceral and complete—she rips open his belly and watches him die. Yet the story complicates justice by having her refuse to free herself from the curse. The swamp has become her identity; revenge has merged her with the very violence she suffered. The ending suggests that retribution, even when successful, can trap the avenger in a cycle of monstrosity. The beast symbol reappears here: she becomes a predator, mirroring the oppressor she destroyed.

Collective Retribution in “Water Goes, Sand Remains”

Jolie Toomajan’s chapter during the Armenian Genocide shows women transforming into a lake creature to attack Ottoman soldiers. Mayr’s hands become raw pink flesh, and she eats lake fern as part of her metamorphosis. The vengeance is collective and elemental: the lake itself rises to kill. Here revenge serves as survival and resistance against imperial violence. Yet Jolie’s perspective remains that of a daughter watching her mother become something alien. The victory is pyrrhic—the women lose their human forms and relationships. The labyrinth symbol (the city’s crypt in the first chapter) is mirrored by the lake’s inescapable grasp: genocide creates a maze of suffering from which the only exit is monstrous transformation.

Essie’s Revenge and Rescue in “The Mother-Wound”

Essie, the daughter of the shape-shifting Light Bringer, hunts down the men who kidnapped her sister Silvia. Wearing borrowed faces, she infiltrates the kidnappers and slices open one man’s stomach, mimicking her mother’s violent power. But Essie’s revenge is tempered by her goal: to reclaim her sister and reconnect with her mother. She does not fully consume the oppressor; she uses violence as a tool to break the cycle of abandonment. The scene where Light Bringer remembers her past and collapses blurs the line between revenge and forgiveness. Essie chooses to carry the mother-wound instead of passing it on. The eggshells symbol—fragile memory—resonates here: Essie cracks open her mother’s amnesia to restore identity, not to destroy.

Complexity and Contradiction

The anthology refuses easy moralizing. Revenge is often depicted as necessary for survival, yet it dehumanizes the avenger. In “She,” the protagonist becomes a swamp monster; in “Water Goes, Sand Remains,” the women merge with a lake; in “Obedient Son,” a mother carves her son’s flesh after his death—a grotesque act of filial piety that subverts revenge. The Beast, first introduced as a scapegoat for disease, reappears as an internal force: the oppressed become the beast they hunted. The labyrinth is not only the city but also the mind’s maze of trauma, through which victims must navigate to find any semblance of justice. Balloons, a recurring symbol of childhood and fragility, pop under the weight of adult violence.

Study Questions and Answers

  1. How does Charity’s lack of supernatural power affect her quest for justice?
    Without supernatural aid, Charity relies on memory and testimony. Her father’s denial underscores how institutional and familial power silences victims. Her only revenge is to name the abuse, but it fails to bring legal or emotional restitution.

  2. In “She,” why does the protagonist refuse to break the swamp curse after killing her father?
    The swamp has become part of her identity, shaped by years of trauma. Rejecting the curse would mean rejecting the power that saved her. The story implies that victims may cling to vengeful transformations because they offer agency, even at the cost of humanity.

  3. How does “Water Goes, Sand Remains” complicate the idea of collective justice?
    The Armenian women’s transformation into a lake creature achieves victory over the soldiers, but it separates them from their families and human existence. Jolie’s loss of her mother suggests that collective retribution can sacrifice individual relationships and create new wounds.

  4. What role does memory play in the revenge narratives of Death in the Mouth?
    Memory is both weapon and wound. Charity’s father tries to erase her memory; Essie restores her mother’s memory to heal the mother-wound. Revenge often depends on remembering the original harm, but forgetting can also be a path to liberation—the anthology leaves that tension unresolved.

  5. How does the symbol of the labyrinth relate to the theme of revenge?
    The labyrinth represents the systems—patriarchy, genocide, colonialism—that trap victims. Revenge becomes a way to navigate or escape the labyrinth, but it rarely leads to a clear exit. The Beast and the Judgement are both inside the maze, showing that oppressors and victims are entangled in the same structure of violence.