Chapter 9: The Brutal Bargain with Detective Clarke

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Summary

Con arrives in Chinatown, DC, and buys hairbrush and makeup to look human for Detective Darius Clarke. She washes in a coffee shop bathroom and struggles to untangle her hair. Meeting Clarke at a restaurant, he immediately treats her with contempt, calling her a clone and questioning her existence. He wants her to access the GPS data from her biometric chip to find the original Constance D’Arcy’s body. Con bargains: she will give the GPS only if he helps her get a death certificate quickly and access to her belongings. Clarke reveals that the original was married about a year ago—a fact Con didn’t know due to memory loss. He offers to make her a confidential informant, but Con refuses. She leaves after telling Clarke that she is “right here,” refusing to accept that the original is dead.

Key Events

Con cleans up and applies makeup to appear less clone-like.
She meets Detective Darius Clarke, who is disdainful and calls her a “Gucci” (knockoff).
Clarke explains he needs GPS data from her chip to locate the original’s body.
Con bargains for a fast death certificate and access to her possessions.
Con learns she has a husband (the original married) and is shocked.
Clarke threatens her, grabs her wrist, and tries to intimidate her into cooperating.
Con refuses to give the GPS and walks away, asserting her own existence.

Character Development

Con: Shows resilience and strategic thinking. She suppresses her temper to negotiate. Her identity crisis deepens when learning about the marriage. She chooses long-term independence over short-term aid.
Darius Clarke: Revealed as prejudiced and manipulative. He treats clones as less than human, uses the term “Gucci” derogatorily, and tries to dominate the conversation. His contempt for Con is personal and professional.
The husband (unnamed): Though absent, the disclosure of his existence shakes Con’s sense of self and introduces a new obstacle.

Themes, Symbols, or Motifs

Dehumanization through language: Clarke’s use of “clone,” “Gucci,” “online” reduces Con to a product. She fights to be seen as a person.
Memory and identity: Con’s missing 18 months make her feel like a stranger to her own life; learning of a husband contradicts everything she thought she knew.
Power and bargaining: The chapter is a tense negotiation. Con trades information for survival, echoing earlier bargaining scenes (e.g., with Kala).
Cloning and legal limbo: Virginia’s anti-cloning laws strip Con of rights. Clarke exploits this to threaten her.

Why This Chapter Matters

This chapter drastically raises the stakes. Con’s discovery that the original had a husband—someone she cannot remember—complicates her quest to reclaim her life. Clarke’s hostility shows how little legal protection clones have, especially those without wealth. Con’s decision to withhold the GPS demonstrates her growing resolve, but it also means she will remain homeless and vulnerable. The chapter sets up a central conflict: Con versus the institutional power that wants to erase her.

Study Questions & Answers

1. Why does Con buy makeup and wash herself before meeting Detective Clarke? Con understands that looking “like a clone” (with newborn-perfect skin) will reinforce Clarke’s prejudice. She wants to appear human and gain his respect, hoping he will take her seriously and help her.

2. What shocking fact does Clarke reveal about the original Constance D’Arcy? He tells Con that the original was married about a year earlier. Con has no memory of this, adding a new layer of estrangement from her own life.

3. How does Con respond when Clarke grabs her wrist and threatens to treat her as a Gucci? She demands to be let go, points out they are in DC (not Virginia) where she has rights, and ultimately refuses to give him the GPS data. She leaves, asserting that she is “right here”—the real Constance.